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Anastasiya: 
~Dream Threads-Really beautiful piece. I like the image that you get as you read. The flow of the story is really good too. 
~Dream Marks on My Pillow-I love this piece! I like the connection it has with the readers. Me and my ex boyfriend (who is my best friend and hopefully we'll soon be together again) know this really well. Long distance is super tough. Good job!!
~If I Were In Charge of the World-Beautiful piece, i love the things that you change. Like more forest and more sleep. 
~Caged Bird-Beautiful piece, love the description, that place would be lovely
~Don't Quote Me on That-Love the quotes you chose, the meaning and the emotion they have.

Taylor:
~Dream Threads-That was sad and beautiful and wow. Good job. I love the description and the story inside of it really grabs the reader's attention.
~Dream Marks on My Pillow-"engulfing me like the violent ocean waves during a storm" LOVE that line. "The only traces of you are the dream marks on my pillow." LOVE IT! You are a really good writer. From the description to the meaning of the story all the way to the flow, it just really engages the reader and gets them to want to read more.
~If I Was In Charge of the World-Really good job! I love how their would be no more sadness and pain. The last verse is my favorite verse. :)
~At Least You Have Time-I love the flow and it kinda of -for some reason in my mind- makes me think of music when reading it.I like the way it goes for I don't know to I know
~Don't Quote Me on That-Beautiful quotes, I like how some are anonymous haha